This is Rewel. The primary function of a Thief is to
maintain the silence of the people; the secondary function is that of plaything
to the Speakers.
Matduke sits across the table from me staring out the
window. He has hardly touched the food in front of him, although it is not
particularly appetizing. This is not the first dinner he’s shared with me and I
doubt it will be the last. He sits still perfectly, even the prosthetic eye
does not focus. The moon creeps barely above the horizon, bathing the city in
its grey light. Matduke speaks moonlight. “Do you know what years are, Rewel?”
The word is familiar but I do not understand it; I shake my
head.
Matduke stays silent for a few moments longer then turns to
rest his good eye on me. The prosthetic one is off. “One year is the amount of
time it takes the earth to orbit the sun completely. There are three hundred sixty-five
days in one year. Do you understand?”
I nod. It seems like a great deal of time in one of these
years.
He smirks slightly, the wires in his face moving with his
muscles. “Would you believe me if I said you are twenty-five years old?” I do not respond causing him to laugh. “Of
course not. You wouldn’t believe anything I tell you.” He stares out the window
again, the laughter falls out of his mouth and spills on the floor in beads
escaping the confines of the white dining room. “You won’t believe that I am
253 years old…”
I say nothing as I know not what to say. Years seem distant
and inconsequential and I do know not what the significance could be if I were
twenty-five or 253. Again, Matduke speaks. “Do you know what stars are, Rewel?”
His voice is far away between here and the moon.
Glancing out at the night sky, I shake my head. The
moonlight beats on us as Matduke sighs. “You will know someday, Rewel. Someday
you will leave.”
I nod again, but I do not understand.
This is a good job of conveying the ignorance of the thieves in comparison to the knowledge of the speakers. And you do it very effectively in a short amount of time. In particular the sentence "His voice is far away between here and the moon." comes to mind. Though, I think you could probably focus more on making Rewel a "plaything". It already seems that way but it could go further. Though, it would depend on how exactly creepy you want the speakers to be.
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